.. I'm always thinking about the story and wondering what I should have done and why. A story can always be better. Don't forget that.For some odd reason my best ideas always come too late.Eventually, however, I forget about that story and write a new one, and then a dozen new ones, and after two years I pretty much forget what the hell it was even about! That's the best time to open a story up and proof it! Not right away! Wait until you think it's someone else's story. The mistakes will jump out at you like drunken Irishmen on St. Patty's Day, believe me. Everyone's Irish when you're spread eagle on the pool table. Its weird.That makes it the perfect time to do a little review as well..."Dogsmith" was written by Lisa Pavageau in early 2006 for nevermindwho.com and posted to SOL sometime after the exclusivity rights expired, under the pen name rache. The title is a word I made up for a working title and a better one never occurred to me. I hadn't looked at it since posting and I. "Trust me." I spoke softly, calmly despite my own inner nervousness.Turning to lift the tray from the desk, I bent down to place it on the floor before my girl, as I spoke her eyes kept flitting from my own to the tray and back. "You have been sold to the highest bidder, so now you have a choice, before you on the tray lies you old life, your belongings, the contents of your apartment, all are in storage, the key for which is before you. Now open the envelope." I paused as my girl reached out, picking up the envelope, ripping it open to spill the banknotes across the tray. "That is your share of the auction price, 150,000." I paused. "Your choice is simple, you may take the money and return to your old life, or you may trust me to give everything on the tray to the winning bidder, your owner, for safekeeping. The choice is yours." Another pause as our eyes locked. If you wish to leave, simple pick up the tray and walk out. If you wish to stay, place the tray upon the desk and kneel.
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